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By Anonymous on Tue, 2008-04-01 03:07

I ask you to consider your statement in the 2nd to last paragraph in parentheses, "...But the universe is finite and the energy runs out eventually). This is of course theory and far advanced and very questionable theory at that. I am not saying that I disagree with you, but rather that I would beware of putting off a reader because of such a statement. They may have a very different idea (maybe in a subtle manner, maybe in a gross one) but they are reading your writing because they are interested in your Zen writings. I do not find such a statement inimical to zen. Meant in the best way possible. Of course, I suppose that I could also take you to task for a lot of what you have written but it was mainly that one statement that grabbed me. But you do have an underlying acceptance of Darwinian principles in this writing. Nothing wrong with that...just be sure to know your intended audience.
harmonyblessingsjoy

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